Dear Pain,
well pain,
you have perfectly predicted the rain,
now go away,
stay away,
let the sun warm my body today.
Sincerely, Achy Jake
Thanks for reading
Trying to get the keyboard clicking again, here’s a quickie hope you smiled.
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Moe Radosevich
I am always touched when something I write touches another so if any of you my fellow creators have been touched thank you
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thought I had commented on this! this made me smile and resonated with it! well done on TS!
This made me chuckle. Well done! 😄
"quickies" are always the best!
Smiled indeed. 😀 Thank you, Moe and congrats on your top story!
I can understand, how arthritis can be affected by the rain. Feel better.
This is an interesting poem
Congratulations on your Top Story 🎉💖🎉🎉
Congratulations on Top story! Lovely ❤️
Congrats Moe!!
Congrats on the TS
Smiling! Congrats on top story- loved this one! 💫
Ah, that darn humidity! It does a turn to your body, that's for sure! Great poem!
It's something how the weather can affect the body. I guess this shows how connected we are to the elements. Biblical history states that our forefather adam was created from the dust of the earth. Rain does effect and affect the earth. I guess that is why it can change how we feel.
Great work
This did make me smile!
Aw man, my husband had surgery on her ankle years ago and it aches whenever it's about to rain. So many know this pain! Great job! :)
Oh, thise knees!!
😁 smiled for sure!
Yes, I did smile. Thank you for that.
Right there with ya, buddy! Great job!