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Dear Pain

Rain

By Moe RadosevichPublished 5 months ago β€’ 1 min read
Top Story - April 2023
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Dear Pain
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Dear Pain,

well pain,

you have perfectly predicted the rain,

now go away,

stay away,

let the sun warm my body today.

Sincerely, Achy Jake

Thanks for reading

Trying to get the keyboard clicking again, here’s a quickie hope you smiled.

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About the Creator

Moe Radosevich

I am always touched when something I write touches another so if any of you my fellow creators have been touched thank you

Write on my friends

Sure would appreciate more reads and maybe some tips or pledges thank you

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  • Paul Stewart5 months ago

    thought I had commented on this! this made me smile and resonated with it! well done on TS!

  • Loryne Andawey5 months ago

    This made me chuckle. Well done! πŸ˜„

  • Amari Parker5 months ago

    "quickies" are always the best!

  • Lamar Wiggins5 months ago

    Smiled indeed. πŸ˜€ Thank you, Moe and congrats on your top story!

  • Mariann Carroll5 months ago

    I can understand, how arthritis can be affected by the rain. Feel better.

  • AngelBee5 months ago

    This is an interesting poem

  • Congratulations on your Top Story πŸŽ‰πŸ’–πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰

  • C. H. Richard5 months ago

    Congratulations on Top story! Lovely ❀️

  • Congrats Moe!!

  • Cathy holmes5 months ago

    Congrats on the TS

  • Kristen Balyeat5 months ago

    Smiling! Congrats on top story- loved this one! πŸ’«

  • Cendrine Marrouat5 months ago

    Ah, that darn humidity! It does a turn to your body, that's for sure! Great poem!

  • John M Edwards Jr5 months ago

    It's something how the weather can affect the body. I guess this shows how connected we are to the elements. Biblical history states that our forefather adam was created from the dust of the earth. Rain does effect and affect the earth. I guess that is why it can change how we feel.

  • Great work

  • This did make me smile!

  • Gina C.5 months ago

    Aw man, my husband had surgery on her ankle years ago and it aches whenever it's about to rain. So many know this pain! Great job! :)

  • Oh, thise knees!!

  • Donna Renee5 months ago

    😁 smiled for sure!

  • Cathy holmes5 months ago

    Yes, I did smile. Thank you for that.

  • Dana Crandell5 months ago

    Right there with ya, buddy! Great job!

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