Dear Fate,
I have to know,
to what do I await?
What is there in store for me
what did you predate?
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I don't mean my departing,
or where I go from here
I'm asking what happens next?
The future seems unclear
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Is this all that's to expect
the world offers little
I feel hopeless and unfulfilled
like I'm stuck inside a riddle
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When does the magic come
the stars align, and quests begin?
When do I get the chance to fly?
How does my story spin?
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I thought there'd be a hero here
a noble knight, a villain there.
I thought there'd be skies that sing
like the heavens were in prayer
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This can't be all that I endure
I want to see a world that's pure
where the moon will laugh, wink, and play
and the sun has powers that can cure
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Tell me, Fate, where do I find
this world I've seen in my mind?
How do I leave this one behind
to reach the one divined?
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Don't tell me that I dreamt it up
that all I'll see has been corrupt
I can't stay here when every day
my hope has been destruct
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Fate, please, I beg of you
free me of life so meager
I'll patiently wait for your reply
Sincerely, the Dreamer
About the Creator
Brin J.
I have a few stories and poems inside me that I want to share. Maybe, if I'm lucky, they'll reach people who'll enjoy them. 📖
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Comments (6)
Very good!
Excellent ❤️
Nicely written! ❤️Anneliese
I love this ❤️ It's beautiful and amazing!
Aww, this was such a beautiful plea. I loved the signature. Well done :)
Beautiful, Brin. Just lovely.