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Dear Chaos,

A poem about Chaos for the Epistolary challenge

By Mohammed DarasiPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
Dear Chaos,
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Dear Chaos,

You visit us with the most gifts

Removing the masks often worn

Causing tiffs and rifts

Between friends once sworn

You cause mayhem and confusion

And can also bring about diffusion

Of ideals once held by the masses

Ideals nature refuses


Morals thrown become useless

When you appear

You change all that is known

Allowing a new age to throne

Ideals born to you now rule

Amongst those left, they drone


Ideals of yesteryear still slither in and survive

Might become victorious and shed a light

Of morality and integrity. Alive

Humans persevering to maintain

What was theirs before you came

Of decency and togetherness

Now go back to whence you came

Yours sincerely,



This poem was inspired by an article I wrote years ago here on Vocal. it was about what would happen if Chaos ensued. You can read it here

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Mohammed Darasi

I write fiction, poetry and occasional articles about interesting topics. I recently created a website (just because) which I will be posting my writing in (among other things). it would be great if you check it out. https://mindpit.co.uk/

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  • L.C. Schäfer12 months ago

    Very well done. Thought provoking and hard hitting 🤔

  • Paul Stewartabout a year ago

    Loved this! clever and makes you think! you have a new subscriber!

  • Donna Reneeabout a year ago

    That was so well done! I enjoyed the rhythm and rhymes👏❤️

  • Kristen Balyeatabout a year ago

    Wonderful job, Mohammed! Very vivid and evoked strong emotion! Amazing work, my friend!!!

  • Kelli Sheckler-Amsdenabout a year ago

    Great job. A pleasure to read

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    This was beautifully written and constructed. Deep and thought-provoking - well done!

  • This was so deep and emotional! Brilliant!

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Super entry!!!😊💖

  • Shane Dobbieabout a year ago

    Excellent imagery here. Well done. Subscribed

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