they asked me right there and then
what am i really good at
(you don't wanna know i thought to myself on an undetectable wavelength i had stored away in my mind for an occasion such as this)
so i told them in no uncertain terms
(..this'll be good)
i told them
like they'd never
been told before
i like to whine
i like to moan
i like to grouse
i like to groan
i like to sook
i like to puss
i like to completely fuckin woos
i like to cry
i like to whinge
im a twat
i'm a minge
i can be your little witch
i can be your little snitch
i can be your little rat
i can be your little bitch
i could be a fucking fink
i could be a fuckin stoolie
i could be a witness for the other fucking team
i like to lie i like to steal
i will sour every single deal
make it
i’ll break it
take it
i’ll fake it
i live a lie
in my eye
maybe...
maybe...
this is oversharing
this
this husk
this shell
this life
this hell
About the Creator
Brenton F
It's just a token of my extreme - Frank Zappa
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Comments (4)
Oh God, I too would feel like I'm oversharing! This was awesome!
What i wanna know is... who gave you less than an Outstanding for this? c n u t 😂
Very good. Hits hard.
Wow. Dr Seuss meets Sigmund Freud. Awesome my Australian friend… Next time…, a smidge fewer days up bush. I think it … affected you. 🤣😇🤣