Heady, sweaty mind
swings from the rafters of the
panting, wanting heart.
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Colleen Walters
i’m just a girl in Florida who likes to write things, usually inspired by events and people in my life..Always be you, because you are awesome-
When I grow up, I want to be a kid again.
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I like this one too!
Fabulous! I just can't get bored of your words🥰😊