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Dawn Breaks the Waste

Drink the Sky

By C. Rommial ButlerPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - December 2023
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Vincent Van Gogh

Dawn Breaks the Waste

Take the time to drink the sky

Where the erratic flights of starlings

Reinforce unseen by-paths

Under a wall of gray cloud

As the first light of dawn

Pushes up from beneath--

Atlas shoulders the world.

His stern gaze disperses the clouds

To leave a kaleidoscopic sky

Painted over the azure depths.

Slowly the canvas eats the paint

Until all that remains

Is a heart untainted, pure--

Illuminated but obscure.

The air magnetic;

The fire dynamic.

Dawn breaks the waste.

***** * *****

Part of You

The particles

(part of you)

The fire

Failed to consume...

The smoke.

The heavy air.

Interpenetrates

Everything,

Everywhere.

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The fire gutters low

As the smoke disperses

Amid random curses

Eternity doth bestow.

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No one will ever know.

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No one will ever know

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No one will ever know.

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About the Creator

C. Rommial Butler

C. Rommial Butler is a writer, musician and philosopher from Indianapolis, IN. His works can be found online through multiple streaming services and booksellers.

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Outstanding

Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!

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  1. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

  2. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

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  • Test3 months ago

    Outstanding! Keep striving for greatness

  • Denise E Lindquist4 months ago

    Congratulations on your top story!🎉🎉🎉

  • Yayyyyy I'm back to say congratulations on your Top Story!

  • Cathy holmes4 months ago

    Thus is lovely. Congrats on the TS.

  • Jay Kantor4 months ago

    ~Just Bitchin' CR ~ JB

  • Rachel Deeming4 months ago

    I don't know who gave you a "Nice Work" insight but I've upped it to "Outstanding" as that is how I view it. Wonderful - pastoral, emotional, and sad too. That takes some doing.

  • Avila Osinta 4 months ago

    "The air magnetic; The fire dynamic." Love this line❤️❤️❤️

  • Kristen Balyeat4 months ago

    Yes, so glad to see this as a top story! So well deserved! ✨💫

  • Paul Stewart4 months ago

    Oh wowser. This was stunning. Absolutely stunning and I cannot pick out favourite bites because everything is a favourite bit. Congrats on this getting the deserved Top Story!

  • Some enlightening lines, loved this

  • "The air magnetic, the fire dynamic" "As the smoke disperses, amid random curses" These were my favourite line! Your poem was so deep and intense! I absolutely loved it!

  • Kristen Balyeat4 months ago

    Absolutely gorgeous and magical! Many lines in here literally took my breath. Beautiful piece!

  • Mother Combs4 months ago

    lovely

  • Grz Colm4 months ago

    Brilliant! ☺️👏

  • Rene Peters4 months ago

    This was beautiful! Love it!

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