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Mountain, dark, stifling.
Dread infiltrates body, soul.
Praying sun will rise.
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Mary Haynes
Mary Haynes splits her time between a romantic old sailboat in tropical waters and a beach home in Ontario. A wanderer, by fate, she embraces wherever she roams! Mary recently completed her first children’s book, “Who Ate My Peppers?”
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Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Masterful proofreading
Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme
Comments (2)
This is wonderful and gives off the vibes of the perfect horror. It really sends the mind racing in a creative way- I love it! Thank you so much for sharing! 🥰💜
Fantastic!!! Love it!!!