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Dangling Distractions

A poem

By Ruth StewartPublished 11 months ago Updated 11 months ago 1 min read
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Dangling Distractions
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Dancing, dangling distractions, gleefully dragging our minds away…

Internal dialogue nagging, intense concentration needed to stay focused.

Simply resisting those delightful things, dopamine-inducing frolicking temptations

Terribly, our minds betray us, reaching for cell phones or bottles of beer,

Racing thoughts run through our minds, if only we could just….

achieve the greatness to which we aspire, without the constant consistency required!

Coffee, now, and perhaps some respite, from the words that we’re required to write

Tasty, warm, and reassuring, perhaps now those words will come

I don’t know how long I’ll try, to express here what I feel inside

On and on distractions come; if it’s not “Mum,” it’s wagging tails,

No brief let up, dancing distractions will thwart our purpose.

fact or fiction
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About the Creator

Ruth Stewart

I'm a grandmother of four amazing grandchildren and a mum of three fabulous children. I write poetry mainly, also prose and the odd story. I live in Scotland, UK. For a secret link to watch me read my favourite poems click right here!

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  • Dana Crandell11 months ago

    Great job and very original, Ruth! I really enjoyed it.

  • Lol, if it's not "Mum", it's wagging tails 🤣🤣🤣 If always one thing or another distraction us! Loved your poem!

  • Paul Stewart11 months ago

    Oooh, this is awesome, hon. This or Your Kids is probably my favourite of your entries for this challenge. First class work, hon!

  • MARIE ODEMS 11 months ago

    👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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