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Dancing with Life

By The Invisible WriterPublished 11 months ago Updated 11 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - June 2023
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Dancing with Life
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Days in the breeze, bare feet running along streams

Indigo blue midnights, bon fires under the stars

Sleepy mornings, hands wrapping around, warm cups of coffee

Tuesdays eating tacos, sharing laughs with close friends

Relaxing in the orange glow of sunsets, cocktail escapes on back decks

Afternoons backpacking through tall grass, waking up in the middle of forests

Campfire story evenings, marshmallows roasting over crackling flames

Trips on winding roads, beach vacations, rafting down rivers

Islands in the Caribbean, discovering new cultures, making memories in photographs

Oceans flowing in waves, surf boards sticking upright in the sand

Nights dancing with distractions, kisses, you would die for

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Dance with the distractions of life. Find ways to escape, to get away from the every day world. Take time out to be a free spirit. Keep the ones you love close. Remember what's really important, forget what isn't. Find peace. Set drama aside. Breathe in, breathe out. Take a pause. Take in the beauty that’s all around you. Feel the healing power of just being for a while. Love the moments that take you by surprise. Let your feet carry you down a beach, go into the spaces between trees. Push the accelerator down in your car, feel the wind in your hair. Turn the music up, sing out loud. Create a bucket list, start checking things off.

Life is full of responsibilities. Take care of them, but don’t let them define you.

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The Invisible Writer

"Poetry is what happens when nothing else can"

Charles Bukowski

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  • L.C. Schäfer8 months ago

    I felt freer just reading this 😁

  • Naomi Gold10 months ago

    Oh this is gorgeous writing! And exactly the kind of distractions I can get behind. I find “distraction” such a negative word, implying that one is evading responsibility or running from problems. Your poem has made me wonder if sometimes what I consider a problem worth focusing on is not really a distraction from me enjoying life.

  • Hannah Moore10 months ago

    I like how this reminds us that distraction can be the best part of life.

  • Jacqueline Leigh10 months ago

    heartfelt and inspiring

  • JamaisWang11 months ago

    Right to the heart. Love it xoxo

  • Novel Allen11 months ago

    Already read and loved. Congrats.

  • Entertainment 4 U11 months ago

    The concept of "Dancing with Life" acknowledges that life is a dynamic and unpredictable journey. It recognizes that we cannot control or predict every outcome, but we have the ability to respond with grace, resilience, and a positive mindset. To "Dance with Life" means to be fully present and engaged in each moment, accepting both the joys and the hardships as part of the human experience. It involves letting go of rigid expectations and attachments to outcomes, instead embracing the flow of life and finding joy in the process. https://lyricswrits.com/

  • C.Z.11 months ago

    This really evokes that elusive summer beach vacation feeling ❤️ I really like this!

  • Caroline Jane11 months ago

    This reads like a wish list! I would welcome any and all of those distractions! Congratulations on your top story. ❤️

  • Mariann Carroll11 months ago

    What a wonderful life imagery 🥰💓

  • Grz Colm11 months ago

    Too true! Beautiful job. Congrats on your top story too. 😊

  • HASIBUL HASAN11 months ago

    This is a very nice adorable

  • Christopher Donovan11 months ago

    So uplifting! Congrats on the Top Story!!

  • Possible Agebe11 months ago

    Good 👍

  • Gerard Evans 11 months ago

    Great tekst

  • Congratulations on your Top Story🎉🎉

  • Joelle E🌙11 months ago

    This is delicious!! Thank you!!

  • Gerald Holmes11 months ago

    Love this. One of the best I've seen. I love your part at the end. I could add one more, "Dance like no one's watching." Great job and congrats on the Top Story.

  • Adenubi John11 months ago

    It is so nice

  • Ashley Lima11 months ago

    This is so beautiful. I felt the peace in every line. Congrats on TS, well deserved!

  • Starlight Tucker11 months ago

    Beautifully written :)

  • manivannan k11 months ago

    attractive heading

  • Mihail Ionescu11 months ago

    Your words paint a picture of pure joy and freedom. They remind us to treasure the little moments, embrace our loved ones, and find solace in nature. May you continue to dance through life, creating beautiful memories and chasing your dreams. Thank you for sharing this inspiring piece!

  • Jay Kantor11 months ago

    Hi-i ~ Ah, So Miss 'Kisses I would Die for' ~ Jay Jay Kantor, Chatsworth, California 'Senior' Vocal Author - Vocal Author Community -

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