Note: the poem below was written in such a way that it can be viewed in its original undistorted formatting only on a desktop. If reading from a mobile browser: switch to desktop mode. If reading from the Vocal app: switch to the mobile browser and from there—to desktop mode.
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About the Creator
Andrei Z.
Overthinker.
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Masterful proofreading
Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
Comments (6)
Stringing us along off the deep-end, that's a truly distracting poem. So precise.
Impressive & creative!!! Left a ♥
Are you trying to mess my mind up? Cos, it kinda worked! I love your outside-the-box, through-the-book-out-the-window approach and how well it landed! Seriously impressive. I also just want to mumble a bit more to say that the thing I love is that, it's not just all high concept...the word choices are very deliberate and the arrangement is very deliberate and it just makes the whole thing an absolute treat to read and think over! Well done, Andrei!
It must ahve taken you AGES to format this - very impressive!
That was cool!!!
Andrei, I love this! It feels raw, emotion-filled, thought provoking and inspiring! I really appreciate the formatting of it and the time you put into arranging this way. What is the word connected to affliction and implication?