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experimental poem

By Andrei Z.Published 11 months ago Updated 11 months ago 1 min read
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D  I  §  C  Ø  N  И  E  C  T  E  D
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Note: the poem below was written in such a way that it can be viewed in its original undistorted formatting only on a desktop. If reading from a mobile browser: switch to desktop mode. If reading from the Vocal app: switch to the mobile browser and from there—to desktop mode.

D      i     s     c     o     n     n     e     c     t     e     d

         d

         e

         a

         s     u     f     f     o     c     a     t     i     n     g     i     n

                                                         e

                                                         a

                                                         r     e     c     i     p     r     o     c    a     l

                                                         s                                                     f

                                                                                                                f

                                                                                                                e

                                        n     o     i     Ɉ     ɒ     v     i     Ɉ     q     ɒ     ɔ/c

                                                      m                                                       t

                                                       p                                                       i

                                                       l                                                        o

                                                       i                                                        n

                                                       с

                                                       a

                                                       t

                                                       i

                                                       o     p     e    n     m     i     n     d     e     d

                                                       n                   e

                                                                             v

                                                                             e

                                                                             r

                                                                             e

                                                                             n

                                                                             d

                                                                             i

                                                                             n

                                                                             g

                                                                             s

                                                                             e

                                                                             l

                                                                             f

                                                                             d

                                                                             i

                                                                             s

                                                                             s

                                                                             e

                                                                             n

                                                                             s

                                                                             i

                                                                             o

                                                                             n

                                                                              .

                                                                              

surreal poetry
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About the Creator

Andrei Z.

Overthinker.

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Outstanding

Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!

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  1. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

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    Well-structured & engaging content

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    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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    Zero grammar & spelling mistakes

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  • Rob Angeli8 months ago

    Stringing us along off the deep-end, that's a truly distracting poem. So precise.

  • Babs Iverson11 months ago

    Impressive & creative!!! Left a ♥

  • Paul Stewart11 months ago

    Are you trying to mess my mind up? Cos, it kinda worked! I love your outside-the-box, through-the-book-out-the-window approach and how well it landed! Seriously impressive. I also just want to mumble a bit more to say that the thing I love is that, it's not just all high concept...the word choices are very deliberate and the arrangement is very deliberate and it just makes the whole thing an absolute treat to read and think over! Well done, Andrei!

  • L.C. Schäfer11 months ago

    It must ahve taken you AGES to format this - very impressive!

  • Lamar Wiggins11 months ago

    That was cool!!!

  • Donna Fox (HKB)11 months ago

    Andrei, I love this! It feels raw, emotion-filled, thought provoking and inspiring! I really appreciate the formatting of it and the time you put into arranging this way. What is the word connected to affliction and implication?

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