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Cutting Ties

thread of indifference

By Brin J.Published 6 months ago 1 min read
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If I cut you off,

you handed me the scissors

and held out the thread.

sad poetrysurreal poetry

About the Creator

Brin J.

I never believed the sky is the limit, therefore my passions are expansive. My interest in writing stemmed from poetry but my heart lead me to Sci-Fi Fantasy. Consequently, my stories are plot-driven with splashes of evocative elements.

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  • Heather Hubler5 months ago

    Oh, this one hit. It completely amazes me how so few words can convey so much. Excellent.

  • Angelina F. Thomas5 months ago

    Outstanding excellent job. Good morning. Today will be glorious.

  • Dana Stewart6 months ago

    Very good! ❤️

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