Candle flames flicker, and lamps strain to shine their light from windows
Indoor lamps strain to shine their light from windows
Fog is heavy, and streetlights are like onions in sack cloths overhead
We can touch the wispy gray strands of fog, strangling the light and our mood
The train whistle echoes through the valley as it sidles past the sea inlet on its way south, its window lights passing behind trees and buildings, going down and up the hilly track, illuminating its path like a card-shuffle animation
And in the morning, the sun cannot slice through the fog, its opaque curtain a ponderous being, creeping around corners and slithering up poles, saturating everything in its path
The birds are hunkered down; no birdsong can be heard today
Then, before night dropped us into blackness, the fog was sucked into the starry sky
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The fog has been heavy and eerie for days, and New Year's Eve brought such a foggy night, the top of Seattle Space Needle couldn't be seen. The fireworks happened but were inside a curtain of fog so not spectacular like most years. This poem was inspired by the heavy fog.
Copyright © 1/5/2026 by Andrea O. Corwin
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