Curious Green
portrait of a friend
the back of her head
softly
slightly wavy
covering her mind
a sea of hair blowing in the wind
starring in the hopes that they´ll reveal
just a touch
of what you still want to know
but just as with the ocean
you might never find
what really lies below
running
looking
never the final resolve
like a whirlewind
uncatchable
unbound
and always free
to go where ever she´d want to be
and fall in love with whatever
she may want to see
sealed lips hiding away
the shinning white
but never covering the truth inside
honest thoughts shamelessly revealed
by the simple raise of an eyebrow
torturing the secrets that remain
it´s like her love for life
reflects in her eyes
every color represented
in it´s own little
perfect spot
from calming brown
to hidden blue
a faint sense of wise grey
and shining curious green
About the Creator
S. Gabriela Heitzinger
I'm a filmmaker from Vienna who loves to do literally anything artsy. From drawing and painting to music to arts and crafts to screenwriting to... I also love to write:) AND read ;) thanks for stopping by <3
Insta: @gabshxtshow
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A word, a picture, a thought, and you are hooked. Someone says something about star signs and within seconds you are talking about star constellations, as if there was nothing else. You say you´ve read about it somewhere. Glowing eyes, passion in your voice and a smile that you couldn´t stop yourself from if you noticed it. And after everything disapeared for a moment except your stars, you notice someone looking at you. Of course. What else could it be. That person must think you are completely insane. Don´t bother everyone with your ideas! Who cares about those? And suddenly everything is gone. The glow in your eyes, the smile, the excitement in your voice.
By S. Gabriela Heitzinger about a year ago in Poets
Comments (8)
I like how you captured her essence with colour!
Beautiful lines
💚Congratulations on a Top Storytelling 🎉🎉🎉💯
Wow, It's full of feelings! I fell in love with the description and metaphors. Amazing ❤😍
Just so very beautiful!
So sublime!
Beautiful piece. Congrats on the top story
Very nice piece! And it gets better with each read - thank you!