I am wandering in this great world,
Tai-Di-Na-Din-Tai!
Where is my last address,
that is not known.
I am here today
so I will be there tomorrow.
This horse carriage of life
Keep running, Tog-Boga-Tog.
Why am I running,
what am I hoping for?
Can't say,
why am I all this?
Where is my end,
what do I know!
I opened my eyes in this world,
woke up.
again I closed my eyes,
fell asleep.
There is action in between.
Maybe That's have my religion.
What is my action for?
For what purpose,
was I born?
I want to know-
his eternal mystery!
About the Creator
Li Ma
Sometimes writing bites me for show my creativity. It's not my profession just my addiction. I hope it will be a great journey with you all.
Happy writing world!!
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This was so deep!
the simplistic formation/syntax of this poem adds to its effectiveness! I found it most interesting at the end when you use "his"....God? Yourself( in third person)? "what do I know!" is not a question...interesting.as well... thank you for this sharing
"There is action in between" Yes indeed. And in those actions we find our meaning. Beautiful piece. ❤'d and subscribed 🤗
Beautiful - questions I ponder often! Lovely work!! 💫
Certainly a question almost everyone pondered at least once in life.
Beautiful words
Lovely work here
Love it.
Fantastic...Our really need think about our life so that we can find out our life mystery!
I enjoyed this,