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Cupcakes, Cakes, and Pie

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By Moe RadosevichPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
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Cupcakes, Cakes, and Pie
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Cupcakes, Cakes, and Pie

A burger today, on Tuesday I will pay,

steak or fillet, well done I say, a potato on the side, smothered with butter I cried,

add a side of beans, dare not forget our greens, quite a meal, how great we feel, as we indulge with pleasure, still knowing,

what awaits is the treasure!

Oh the cupcakes, with icing galore, think I shall have two or more, and the cake we did bake, with a flavor of chocolate milkshake, a piece I'll take,

what has caught the eye, yes, the whipped creme pie, oh my, a piece or two I think shall do,

I’m now tossing in the bed,

with a sugar high, wide open eyes,

compliments of the cupcakes, the cakes, and the pies.

surreal poetry
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Moe Radosevich

I am always touched when something I write touches another so if any of you my fellow creators have been touched thank you

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a year ago

    Good lord, I'm so hungry now, lol!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Oh, that sugar high. Great piece.

  • Grz Colmabout a year ago

    🤤 hungry now! Good one!

  • Lots of things that we love, just found this excellent poem

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