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Cry of Halloween Past

Try Not To Look Back

By Mariann CarrollPublished 7 months ago โ€ข 1 min read
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Fall, it Rain

Itโ€™s Dreary weather that affect you disposition

It bring sad memory of pain

Fall, it is full of cloudy skies

Itโ€™s Gloomy outside

It make you feel a sense of doom

Falling Leaf from a tree

Is the tree crying

Itโ€™s beautiful clothes are falling off, Is the tree bare naked?

Halloween is near

I ate all the candies treats

They get Tricks instead

You vow to love

You give me misery and pain

You are not my Kindred soulmate

You were not a treat

You was just a trick

Be gone you nasty narcissist

Happy Halloween ๐ŸŽƒ

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About the Creator

Mariann Carroll

Proactive for positive change.Born in the City of Chicago ,Illinois.

Multi race .Studied in a foreign country .Fluent in several languages .

fascinated by diversity.A Romantic and a dreamer.Interest in healthy living

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Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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    Well-structured & engaging content

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  • The Invisible Writer6 months ago

    Oh I really like this well done ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿฝ

  • Denise E Lindquist6 months ago

    Not looking back is difficult at times as the beauty and good were mixed in. Nice jobโค๏ธ๐ŸŒนโค๏ธ

  • Frankie Martinelli6 months ago

    I absolutely adore the flow of this!

  • Mother Combs6 months ago

    ๐Ÿ’™

  • May he forever be under the curse of knowing that he's lost you for good & that he would have been much happier being bewitched by you.

  • You were not a treat, you were just a trick. Gosh I loved that line so much! Let's all roar together at all the narcissists!

  • Cathy holmes7 months ago

    Nicely done!

  • Babs Iverson7 months ago

    Awesome!!! This was fantastic, Mariann!!!๐Ÿ’•โ™ฅ๏ธโ™ฅ๏ธ

  • ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿฌ๐ŸŽƒ๐Ÿ‘ป

  • JBaz7 months ago

    That went in a different direction than I thought it was going Well done

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