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Consequences

Are all the gods in on it?

By Sandra Tena ColePublished about a year ago Updated 4 months ago 1 min read
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part I

After three hours and forty-seven minutes – which were worthless to count, because there wasn’t anybody left who would count anyway – late as always, Epimetheus arrived.

part II

Watching him like that, from a distance, Pandora closed her box and left.

part III

Because gods don’t count time in the same way that humans do, during those ten days only an age had passed for the mortals: the life of a new hero, two wars, three demi-gods who’d come to solve the urban problem of men, and one more poem dedicated to Ragnarok.

part IV

And they, poor souls, never saw what was left at the bottom of the box.

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About the Creator

Sandra Tena Cole

Actress, Model, Writer

Co-producer at His & Hers Theatre Company

Esoteric Practitioner

Idealist

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran12 months ago

    Oooo, I loved this one so much!

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