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Tender Tenacious Tenacity - 'Unscramble Challenge'
When there’s talk of Competition I REFUSE to be Impotent
Being Stenotopic's for Insects, Survival is Imminent.
Options express an infinite
Range of Emotions
My Position is
I Piston drive, Incite, imaginative Motion.
Those holding me in Contempt complain, saying, that I don’t play nice.
I’m a soaring dragon, I don’t flock with those titmice.
Some take Notice
Of my Semiotic Poeticism
As my voice will Sopite the masses
Not Septic, but a shock to their Systems, Stretching across all the classes.
A Balanced Isotonic solution Permeating Your Membrane
As my Osmotic rhythm's Permeating In Your Brain.
Nepotistic worshippers bestow their Totems a victory
I'm no Spittoon, they're not Immune
When they Incept my true Symphony.
Not guaranteed to win, I know I'm up against odds
When rivals masterfully create the thumbprints of gods.
So, I must ascend to their level
Thus, master my devils.
Thavien's Token: This poem has been constructed for Heather Hubler's "'Unscramble' Challenge"
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This slaps, hits hard and flows amazingly. Love how it feels like a rap or a rousing victory march chant. Well done on placing...not surprised.
Congratulations on placing in Heather’s challenge ✅
Well darn, Sir. This is excellent. Especially love these lines "Not guaranteed to win, I know I'm up against odds When rivals masterfully create the thumbprints of gods." Well done. and congrats.
What a web of impressive word choice! Very well done! I have to look a few up…
A balanced … that sentence is a thriller!! Fabulous piece with all those unusual words worked in.
Ex-cel-lent! Bravo! I am super impressed with your work. It flows easily; I found it hard not to sound stilted when I wrote mine. I love the foot at the end, the Gods' thumbprint. Good luck!
Not only did this have a very competitive feel, but then you went and added some nerd words and ideas, isotonic and osmotic...Loved this so much!!
Impressive entry! ‘ As my voice will Sopite the masses Not Septic, but a shock to their Systems, Stretching across all the classes.’ The things I’m learning on Vocal!😵💫 Had to look up sopite 🤣
Had to look a few of these words up. Sopite. Which then I felt daft for not deducing. On another note, I cant remember the last time I saw titmouse. What a fantastic name.
"Those holding me in Contempt complain, saying, that I don’t play nice. I’m a soaring dragon, I don’t flock with those titmice." These were my favourite lines! Also, not me thinking titmice were mice in between tits 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Nice work, Thavien. I liked the attack of it as well as all the wordsmithery.
Powerful beginning!!! Love the first two lines, "When there’s talk of Competition I REFUSE to be Impotent" Inspiring!!! Loved it!!!❤️❤️💕