Collapsing constantly
Constantly collapsing
Internally, externally
Externally, internally
Trying, failing
Failing, trying
Neverending roundabout
Roundabout neverending
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Paul Stewart
I'm Paul, a poet, and writer from Glasgow. After 12 years of writing solely for others, it's time to start writing for myself.
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Comments (7)
Its good to see it when the words start pulling thier own keep! I like this one a lot!
Wow. This is great. I really enjoyed this. Well done.
I enjoyed how well this flowed no matter which way you put the words!! That was really stunning work. Made me stop and think for every line.
You always capture the OMG emotions of life and writing on this platform. Yep, a roller coaster of OMGs.
I can feel your words
Awesome ✨ I love the word playing 😉❤️
I really like this!! I can relate to these feelings for sure… what a merry-go-round.