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Collapsing Constantly


By Paul StewartPublished 3 days ago 1 min read

Collapsing constantly

Constantly collapsing

Internally, externally

Externally, internally

Trying, failing

Failing, trying

Neverending roundabout

Roundabout neverending


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Paul Stewart

I'm Paul, a poet, and writer from Glasgow. After 12 years of writing solely for others, it's time to start writing for myself.

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  • Brenton Fa day ago

    Its good to see it when the words start pulling thier own keep! I like this one a lot!

  • Cathy holmes2 days ago

    Wow. This is great. I really enjoyed this. Well done.

  • Heather Hubler2 days ago

    I enjoyed how well this flowed no matter which way you put the words!! That was really stunning work. Made me stop and think for every line.

  • Novel Allen2 days ago

    You always capture the OMG emotions of life and writing on this platform. Yep, a roller coaster of OMGs.

  • Rey Visionary2 days ago

    I can feel your words

  • Awesome ✨ I love the word playing 😉❤️

  • Donna Renee3 days ago

    I really like this!! I can relate to these feelings for sure… what a merry-go-round.

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