Golden nuts, they crunch,
Bubbly cola dances by,
Snack time, is a combination of pure delight.
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About the Creator
Kodah
- Storyteller, Love/Romance, Poetry, Dark, Mental health, Psychological, Surreal, Nature, Mythical
~๐ข๐ฝ๐ธ๐ป๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ผ ๐ฌ๐ช๐ท ๐ซ๐ฎ ๐ช ๐ต๐ฒ๐ฝ๐ฝ๐ต๐ฎ ๐ญ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐น~
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Expert insights and opinions
Arguments were carefully researched and presented
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme
Vale Perficientur
"My tears need a minute to find the edges of my face. If you'll please excuse me." The sarcasm stabbed into Julianaโs heart. Antonia glared at her from the pit of the Lyceum as her student fought to hold back tears that had nothing to do with the pain in her fingers. โYouโre better than this, again.โ
By Matthew Fromm4 days ago in Fiction
Comments (9)
Lovely haiku Kodah! Great work๐
On my way to try this!!!
Excellent , Kodahโค๏ธ
I've heard of this but never tried it, lol. It's like bubble tea, hahahahahahha. Loved your poem!
This a new for me! Love your haiku!
Iโve never heard of this combination, but Iโm intrigued!
I was so not expecting a haiku when opened this one up. I am so glad that it was, though. Delightful!
This has piqued my curiosity and now I have an inquisitive taste bud thing going on! Good Job!
Short and sweet, like the snack to which it pays tribute! Well done!