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Clandestine

A Crown Cinquain

By Dharrsheena Raja SegarranPublished 2 years ago • Updated about a month ago • 1 min read
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Secrets

Burn like hot coals

Scorching her fragile mind

The weight of knowing sears her soul

Burden

~~~~~

Burden

She dared to share

A truth too dark to hold

But trust once broken cannot heal

Fractured

~~~~~

Fractured

By his cold words

Her guilt became her chains

While his deeds festered in the dark

Poison

~~~~~

Poison

Spread through their bond

Each whisper fed the rot

Until their friendship fell apart

Ashes

~~~~~

Ashes

Were all that stayed

Two hearts now torn and burned

Destroyed by silence, guilt, and pain

Secrets


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Author's Notes

If a friend confided in you that they were lying to someone to protect them, but you knew the truth would eventually cause that person deep pain, and they asked you to keep it a secret, what would you do? Could you stay silent, knowing the harm their actions might cause? What would be the right thing to do in that situation?

A Crown Cinquain is a sequence of five cinquain stanzas functioning to construct a larger poem. The syllabic count for each stanza 2-4-6-8-2.

The last line of the previous cinquain stanza is repeated as the first line of the next cinquain stanza.

The final line of the last cinquain stanza does not have to equal the first line of the first cinquain stanza, but it is an option.


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    Written by Dharrsheena Raja Segarran