Chimera Effect
Mirror images
*author’s note: this poem touches on themes of body dysmorphia and emotional abuse*
The Purge reflects back,
swirls clockwise
when the flush handle presses down
into sweet abyss, dark pipes swallow
esophageal contractions
squeeze, squeeze into that dress—
give it away to your skinnier friends,
stepmother says
The Mirror reflects back,
A Chimera,
Lion in front
Goat in middle
Serpent in back
Who will slay the beast?
In the brain, the fusiform gyrus recognizes
the contrapositive image
of your reflection flipped—
left lobe sees the right side
right lobe sees the left side
science says
if only Echo knew how
Narcissus wilts
Lion roars
through the looking glass:
I am the you that sees
Goat breathes fire:
I am the you that burns
Serpent whispers:
I am the you that deceives
Waxed floor tile beneath knees
bows to a porcelain god
Mosaic fragments, reflects back
Pegasus pink
The Fighter mounts dizzy
one Future, shining day
who will slay the beast
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Comments (8)
Great poem Kate! Really creative too ❤️❤️❤️
Congrats on Top Story!🥳🥳🥳
Terrific verse. Your imagery is both clinical and illusory. Your depiction of the thematic message is inspired.
Your writing is very nice you write like this you will be a great writer And I was asked to do a story by going to my vocal ID
Marvelous work! Keep it going—congrats!
You handled this topic very well. Beautiful poem! Congrats on the Top Story.
This is terrific! Very intense! 💙
Woah!