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Chimera Effect

Mirror images

By Kate Kastelberg Published 2 months ago Updated 2 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - February 2024
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*author’s note: this poem touches on themes of body dysmorphia and emotional abuse*

The Purge reflects back,

swirls clockwise

when the flush handle presses down

into sweet abyss, dark pipes swallow

esophageal contractions

squeeze, squeeze into that dress—

give it away to your skinnier friends,

stepmother says

The Mirror reflects back,

A Chimera,

Lion in front

Goat in middle

Serpent in back

Who will slay the beast?

In the brain, the fusiform gyrus recognizes

the contrapositive image

of your reflection flipped—

left lobe sees the right side

right lobe sees the left side

science says

if only Echo knew how

Narcissus wilts

Lion roars

through the looking glass:

I am the you that sees

Goat breathes fire:

I am the you that burns

Serpent whispers:

I am the you that deceives

Waxed floor tile beneath knees

bows to a porcelain god

Mosaic fragments, reflects back

Pegasus pink

The Fighter mounts dizzy

one Future, shining day

who will slay the beast

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About the Creator

Kate Kastelberg

-cottage-core meets adventure

-revels in nature, mystery and the fantastical

-avoids baleful gaze of various eldritch terrors

-your Village Witch before it was cool

-under command of cats and owls

-let’s take a Time Machine back to the 90s

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  • Trishawn Blake2 months ago

    Great poem Kate! Really creative too ❤️❤️❤️

  • Anna 2 months ago

    Congrats on Top Story!🥳🥳🥳

  • Frank Racioppi2 months ago

    Terrific verse. Your imagery is both clinical and illusory. Your depiction of the thematic message is inspired.

  • olymoolla2 months ago

    Your writing is very nice you write like this you will be a great writer And I was asked to do a story by going to my vocal ID

  • You handled this topic very well. Beautiful poem! Congrats on the Top Story.

  • Alex H Mittelman 2 months ago

    This is terrific! Very intense! 💙

  • Manisha Dhalani2 months ago

    Woah!

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