Chill Deathcore Beats to Study to
(10-hour version)
I once thought I that I had it
all figured out,
drunk with hubris, like that rabbit
going on about,
"I've got this in the bag,"
and,
"I'm the fastest one there is."
But any kid who's a whiz
comes to learn
that hers or his
was merely a dose
of exogenous brilliance —
quick,
enough to ace the pop-quiz,
but by the time that
that thick,
standardized
comprehensive test
slaps its hog on the desk,
the high is long-faded,
the comedown slow and hard.
Each question pumps the brakes,
a squeaking, grinding, agonizing ritard
of cognition and sense.
The final score,
a summation of your
academic recompense:
F is for "fucked,"
which you most thoroughly are.
Maybe next time,
once your bleary brain
has healed around the scar.
Get thee gone,
and study,
scrape the grime from those
muddy
details.
You got the gist,
but missed a list
of finer points
much too long to read amidst
these lines.
Sent away this time,
tossed upon the tumultuous
cerebral sea,
you're tumbling,
mumbling something about
fate
as your mind cracks
against the boundaries
of its calcified shipping crate.
Flipping great,
fantastic,
mental gymnastics,
just what the doctor ordered.
Cartwheel, handspring,
backbend, leap,
whatever it takes,
get beyond your borders.
About the Creator
Jacob Sherman
The desire to read, and perhaps to write, should be cultivated and nurtured with care throughout every stage of life. For my part I will inject what strangeness and truth that I can into our written history. Expect no constants but honesty.
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What an utter ripper!