Entering the other side,
Counting the days I left behind,
Lost in the knowledge of what I’d find,
In the depths of my curious mind,
Piecing together power and stride,
Savoring the ride,
Eclipsing the hide
Entering the other side,
Counting the days I left behind,
Lost in the knowledge of what I’d find,
In the depths of my curious mind,
Piecing together power and stride,
Savoring the ride,
Eclipsing the hide
Comments (2)
Interesting choices you made for this one. The consistent rhyme starting from "side" to "behind", along with the meaning imbued in each line, makes for a telling rhythm. I think I like the last line best. I barely see "hide" used as a noun in poetry. It was nice to come across that usage. Great read! ;)
Great poem!