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Brownie Bites

A Fictional Poetic Twist on Food and Feeling

By Michelle Liew Tsui-LinPublished 11 months ago • Updated 11 months ago • 1 min read

It's National Brownie Day, and we pay tribute to this favoured dessert with an Epulaeryu.

Warmth that soothes, a heart that aches.

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Steam ascends from hot chocolate,

Warmth that floods the tongue.

Brown bites, gracing the sides.

Wrap it like a blanket.

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Moist, brownish squares

Soft sponges press the swift tongue,

That embracing warmth,

A soft blanket for the soul.

Sister's sorry for stealing -

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His heart.

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Original poem by Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin. AI tags are coincidental.

An epulaeryu is a short, Japanese poem that celebrates the sensory experience of our favourite foods. It focuses on a particular food and its taste, texture, aroma, and temperature. The poet often weaves a personal experience.

Typically written in eight to ten short lines of 5 to 7 syllables each, capturing the joy of eating. Unlike other strict poetic forms, it does not have a strict syllable count or rhyme scheme per line. But it may contain a subtle twist or vivid imagery for emotional resonance.

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About the Creator

Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin

Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

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    Written by Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin