Bright berry
Berry bright bright bri-ight briii-ight... er... sorry... wrong fruit

Bright berry ripe and ready
Shiny black you make me cheery
Hedgerow fruit autumnal bounty
Nature’s harvest growth a plenty
Fall's sweet nectar
Juice refresh
Ever early summer blessed
Through warming days
Ripening rays
We pluck you from your gangling limbs
Fruity goodness always wins
Your tangy sweetness ever tempts
Lush ripe flesh as heaven sent
You always cheer me
Harvest time
Will always be a friend of mine
So if by grace you offer me
Your wondrous colours for to see
And generous with your fair fruit be
I'll pluck the ripest biggest loot
And keep them all for me
This has to be the worst bit of rhyming rhythm I have so far come up with but, hell, I have spent quite a few days not getting anywhere, so want to complete the thing and be done with it. Consider it a work in progress... and please feel free to pan, provide constructive criticism, or comment in any way you see fit.
I any case, the point of this is to express my delight at plucking the first few blackberries from the brambles a couple of weeks ago. Consumed on the spot, of course. They seem to come earlier each year. If this is global warming, throw a big lump of coal on the fire.
About the Creator
Raymond G Taylor
Author based in Margate on the English Kent coast, having moved from London. Known for his short stories and flash fiction, as well as poetry and non-fiction writing on subjects such as art, science, technology and the human condition
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