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Breathe Life into Life

My reply to " Lifeless Life" by Maryam Batool ❤️

By Colleen WaltersPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 2 min read
Top Story - May 2025

That place where memories float

Lived in what was once a paper boat

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The kid in you is still so BRIGHT

The pillow captured your echoed fright

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The plants you watered have sprouted

In the pots you carved never doubted

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The curtains now wander to the SUN

Reflecting newness, the past undone

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The sky still adores you, says it's YOURS

The stars still singing, open locked doors

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The universe was happy and wants you to be

Through life's TRIALS but it will help you see

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The prismatic colors of a future flight

Flow into your world of black and white

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When we're happy time flies, when we're sad it goes slow

New mercies flow with the sun's golden glow

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Don't ever live SMALL, regret not the past

Look to the sunlight, the dark walls will be BLAST

Start wanting a fresh new START

A world where you DON'T have to grow up

Where the child in you is ALLOWED to show up

Let that child reclaim and catch her sweet breath

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For every death the child in you has died

There's REBIRTH where joy and wonder collide

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That place is still your HOME , not apart

It's both a place and a feeling in your tender heart

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Remember this WORLD that was made just for you

Your joys will outnumber your hurts, by more than a few

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This world holds both TRUTH and yes, lies

But the garden GROWS by the rain from the skies

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You are God's most expansive TREASURE

You are loved BEYOND worth, of this there is no measure

Of the essence of you in your story

Stay strong, stay you, and you'll be SAFE in the Glory.

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Author's note:

"Lifeless Life" by Maryam Batool is deeply moving and this poem is the echo of her call. May we each know that the darkest night brings the brightest sunrise, a promise always kept. Leave the past behind.

" We will know the future but by then it will be the past. Live in the present." 💙

Today is the first day of the rest of your life, so live it today.

Therefore we do not lose heart. Even though our outward man is perishing, yet the inward man is being renewed day by day.”

‭‭II Corinthians‬ ‭4‬:‭16‬ ‭NKJV

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Colleen Walters

Just a girl who likes to write poems, usually inspired by events and people in my Florida life.. Always be you, because you are awesome. You matter. You are enough.. ❤️

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    Written by Colleen Walters