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Blue Mixed With White

by Mescaline Brisset 2 months ago in heartbreak
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Blue was mixed with white

And its strength was enslaved

This cloudless sky

Became blotchy

Brewed like black coffee

Which I can’t stand

Get used to my tall flat whites

Served abundantly

When you are not here

And I am glad

From all joints cut

Conflicting coils

Convolute only

In my brain

While you are there

Probably painting paths

Until you catch

New adventures

Out of the corner of your eye

I regret

That I ever looked aside

Too concentrated

On my own life

Containing

As many colours as I need

To dye my world sufficiently

No mixing

With yours

With too many extraneous shades

Bringing only

Unnecessary potions of haze

*

September 2022

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Mescaline Brisset

Based in UK. BA Cultural Studies

Poetry, Fiction, Non-fiction in British English.

Currently working on my books. Keep reading…

'Sister I'm a Poet' (Morrissey)

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  • Rick Henry2 months ago

    Very nice! Well-done!

  • Po Tin2 months ago

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  • Dawn Salois2 months ago

    Very well written!

  • Nona Lunemann2 months ago

    Nice verse about wanting to stop

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  • Tambo Lini2 months ago

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  • Kylara2 months ago

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  • Grilli Fromong2 months ago

    Great writing

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  • Brenton F2 months ago

    The way you weave your words - simply brilliant!

  • Sherlin Tangredi2 months ago

    Great writing

  • Maria Lahti2 months ago

    👍

  • Carland Paulita2 months ago

    Well written

  • Mejra2 months ago

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  • Moe Turner2 months ago

    Thanks for sharing

  • Zuck Schwartzer2 months ago

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