Blue Dream
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By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 2 years ago β’ Updated 2 years ago β’ 1 min read
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Desolate and Sad...
I pushed fast but was dazed,
Sharp from a Blue Dream.
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Comments (7)
I agree with Poppy, I loved that dazed line. Short and delightfully deeep.
Gorgeous poem! So much said in such few words. I love this especially, 'I pushed fast but was dazed'!
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Wow Lonzo this was amazing πππππblue but sometimes we feel blue and poetry helps!
Fabulous!!!πππ
Excellent! Lonzo! πππ
Beautiful visual created by 3 sentenceπ
So, so lovely. Well done! β€οΈ