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Blue Dream

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By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 2 years ago β€’ Updated 2 years ago β€’ 1 min read
Blue Dream
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Desolate and Sad...

I pushed fast but was dazed,

Sharp from a Blue Dream.

sad poetry

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Comments (7)

  • Novel Allen9 months ago

    I agree with Poppy, I loved that dazed line. Short and delightfully deeep.

  • Poppy 9 months ago

    Gorgeous poem! So much said in such few words. I love this especially, 'I pushed fast but was dazed'!

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  • Wow Lonzo this was amazing πŸ˜πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™blue but sometimes we feel blue and poetry helps!

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Fabulous!!!πŸ’•πŸ˜ŠπŸ’–

  • J. S. Wade2 years ago

    Excellent! Lonzo! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

  • C. H. Richard2 years ago

    Beautiful visual created by 3 sentenceπŸ’™

  • Gina C.2 years ago

    So, so lovely. Well done! ❀️

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