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sadness flows vein deep
harboured in hip shaped valleys
drown me in myself
~
Thank you for taking the time to read my haiku. If you’d like, I have another below that’s quite a happier blue-ku ~
About the Creator
Oneg In The Arctic
A storyteller and poet of arctic adventures, good food, identity, mental health, and more.
Co-founder of Queer Vocal Voices
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Comments (6)
Losing ourselves is the worst thing that could happen. Loved this poem!
Oh, the was tragically gorgeous. So well worded and deep. Thank you for sharing!
Awesome💕😊💖
Loved the way that flowed. Sad but beautiful the same time.
Oh my. That's beautiful. Well done.
Enticing