Fly on
Fly away
With a soothing song
In my soul
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Fly on
Fly away
Into my castle
In the sky
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Sailing through the clouds
Where I am King
Nothing hurts me
I get to sing
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Sing a song
Where I am love
Up in the sky
With the dove
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Blackbird
Sail away
Back home
Where I'm safe
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Fly on home
Fly on home
Fly on... Home
About the Creator
Rick Henry Christopher
Writing is a distraction to fulfill my need for intellectual stimulus, emotional release, and soothing the bruises of the day.
The shattered pieces of life will not discourage me.
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Comments (13)
This was so good. Of course you had me at the title Blackbird is my favorite Beatles song. Great prose!
Oh, the freedom and thrill to fly! We’ve all wanted to do this…and feel the wind if we had wings to capture that exhilaration! You captured this wonderful wish in your poem, Rick!
Nice! Thank you💕
i really liked this, often feel like flying away. I find that a flight someplace else such as the sky, makes home feel more comfortable. Not sure my interpretation was yours, but I've been listening to freebird, Right where I am at today
Beautiful poem! To me it suggests the feeling of finally finding peace and freedom from pain and suffering.
Loving your inspirational poem!!!
Love the sense of liberation that your poem made me feel. Beautiful poem!
I love it! It's deeper than it's presented. :)
Peaceful, calm, and relaxing poem emoting freedom. Excellent poem Rick.
Simply Beautiful!!!!
This is wonderful, immediately brought the Beatles song to mind...What a lovely way to start a Thursday
This feels like freedom. Beautiful piece.
Excellent words and I love the sparse format, really draws you in