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Blackbird Fly

Fly on Home

By Rick HenryPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
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Fly on Home

Fly on

Fly away

With a soothing song

In my soul

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Fly on

Fly away

Into my castle

In the sky

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Sailing through the clouds

Where I am King

Nothing hurts me

I get to sing

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Sing a song

Where I am love

Up in the sky

With the dove

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Blackbird

Sail away

Back home

Where I'm safe

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Fly on home

Fly on home

Fly on... Home

inspirationalsurreal poetry
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About the Creator

Rick Henry

Writing is a distraction for me. It takes me to places unknown that fulfill my need for intellectual stimulus, emotional release, and a soothing of the breaks and bruises of the day.

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  • The Invisible Writer14 days ago

    This was so good. Of course you had me at the title Blackbird is my favorite Beatles song. Great prose!

  • Irene Economou4 months ago

    Oh, the freedom and thrill to fly! We’ve all wanted to do this…and feel the wind if we had wings to capture that exhilaration! You captured this wonderful wish in your poem, Rick!

  • Denise E Lindquist4 months ago

    Nice! Thank you💕

  • Antoinette L Brey4 months ago

    i really liked this, often feel like flying away. I find that a flight someplace else such as the sky, makes home feel more comfortable. Not sure my interpretation was yours, but I've been listening to freebird, Right where I am at today

  • Dawn Salois4 months ago

    Beautiful poem! To me it suggests the feeling of finally finding peace and freedom from pain and suffering.

  • Babs Iverson4 months ago

    Loving your inspirational poem!!!

  • Love the sense of liberation that your poem made me feel. Beautiful poem!

  • Keila Aartila4 months ago

    I love it! It's deeper than it's presented. :)

  • Scott Wade4 months ago

    Peaceful, calm, and relaxing poem emoting freedom. Excellent poem Rick.

  • Tiffany Gordon 4 months ago

    Simply Beautiful!!!!

  • This is wonderful, immediately brought the Beatles song to mind...What a lovely way to start a Thursday

  • Cathy holmes4 months ago

    This feels like freedom. Beautiful piece.

  • Excellent words and I love the sparse format, really draws you in

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