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Birth On The Eclipse

Dedicated to My Fantasy Character, Dominique Soto

By Ace MeleePublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Dream Wombo AI, edited by Ace Melee

Entering the world with the moon blocking the Sun,

Curving the illuminance around the abyss.

Locals and families believed

I was cursed; the death of my kids and divorce were blamed upon me.

Pain and grief stayed, but they never grabbed me– never

Stopped me from running and rebuilding my life, and became his queen.

Everybody, honourably nod to welcome the Queen of Gaeriscelleh.

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Some Context (For the Recent Draft Version):

-Dominique is born on the eclipse in the future (around the 2020s) in Colombia. She is one of my supporting characters.

-There is British spelling because Dominique moved to England to start a new life.

-To broadly explain, Dominique and her friends were taken to Verantuvia because someone messed up on a portal-like ritual.

-In Verantuvia (where the Gaeriscelleh empire resides in), people nod in respect for both royalty and in general.

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About the Creator

Ace Melee

-Mainly a horror and fantasy writer.

-I post stories, poetry, and scripts on Vocal. My preferred audience is older teens and adults, but I can adjust for younger teens.

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    Written by Ace Melee