Entering the world with the moon blocking the Sun,
Curving the illuminance around the abyss.
Locals and families believed
I was cursed; the death of my kids and divorce were blamed upon me.
Pain and grief stayed, but they never grabbed me– never
Stopped me from running and rebuilding my life, and became his queen.
Everybody, honourably nod to welcome the Queen of Gaeriscelleh.
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Some Context (For the Recent Draft Version):
-Dominique is born on the eclipse in the future (around the 2020s) in Colombia. She is one of my supporting characters.
-There is British spelling because Dominique moved to England to start a new life.
-To broadly explain, Dominique and her friends were taken to Verantuvia because someone messed up on a portal-like ritual.
-In Verantuvia (where the Gaeriscelleh empire resides in), people nod in respect for both royalty and in general.
About the Creator
Ace Melee
Hello, everyone! Creative writing is an essential asset for me since it frees my imagination from getting hit by the barrier of the skull. It hurts when it's locked in and roars when oppressed- it was destined to soar.
Vocal & my relationship to publishing traditionally
Ever since my small writing beginnings, when I started writing on Vocal in February 2021, I had been in a truly terrible slump & funk when it came to my writing. I had so many unfinished projects, ideas, half finished manuscripts and first chapters that were going nowhere.
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Comments (1)
Expertly written! Great job Ace!