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The tip lodges deep
It’s tired of being secret
Flies out of the bag
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Colleen Walters
i’m just a girl in Florida who likes to write things, usually inspired by events and people in my life..Always be you, because you are awesome-
When I grow up, I want to be a kid again.
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Comments (4)
Hey, I liked this line --- "It’s tired of being secret" Great wordplay my friend!
Oooo, this was so freaking deep. Loved your Haiku
True! I love this haiku! So much to tell in so small lines. You nailed it as you always do! :)
Hi Colleen, I love how the poem evokes a sense of something long concealed finally coming to light. This haiku's imagery and brevity illustrate the emotional weight of unspoken secrets. Super good.