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Between the Last Breath and the Dawn

Reflections from the edge of sleep.

By Tim CarmichaelPublished 4 months ago • 1 min read

The clock ticks within the hollow skull of night,
An oscillation between what is gone and what remains.

I drift upon the tide of consciousness,
A ghost inhabitant of a room constructed of memory.

The ceiling dissolves into the deep indigo abyss,
While shadows lengthen, reaching for the core of thought.

Who gazes back from the glass?

A stranger wearing the mask of years,
Bearing the imprint of a thousand dawns.

The music of the spheres descends,
A melody composed of absences and sighs.

I am the voyager of the internal landscape,
Navigating the currents of a dream.

The spirit recalls the cold of forgotten winters,
A phantom chill that lingers in the blood.

Each breath is a slow measurement of duration,
A rhythmic beat against the vast indifference of time.

I seek the origin of the singular spark,
That ignited this fragile vessel before the dawn.

The cosmos breathes in cycles of expansion,
A lung of infinite dark exhaling mystery.

I am caught in the turning of the great gear,
Waiting for the final resolution of the theme.

The silence deepens, swallowing the last inquiry,
As the mind drifts toward the harbor of eternal rest.

The stars descend to meet the dark horizon,
A slow communion of silent fires.

Beneath the heavy plush of the cosmic shroud,
I contemplate the sequence of the soul.

A secret path opens in the mind,
Leading toward the stillness of the deep,

Where all questions dissolve in the vast,
Unending ocean of the dark.

Author's Note

This poem that I have written explores the mysteries of memory, identity, time, and existence. It follows an inward journey through the mind, where the writer reflects on the passage of life, the search for meaning, and the vast unknown beyond human understanding.

Through images of darkness, stars, and silence, the poem contemplates the connection between the soul and the universe, suggesting that some questions are not meant to be answered, but experienced.

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About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

Let your becoming be louder than your fear, and your smallest steps become the road you once thought impossible to walk. An Appalachian poet and cookbook author my book Beautiful and Brutal Things is on Amazon, Link 👇

https://a.co/d/537XqhW

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    Written by Tim Carmichael