Beneath Babylon’s Blue Baldachin
Blasted bliss

Beneath Babylon’s blue baldachin,
Boldly brocaded by blazing blooms,
Bazaar brokers busily bargain,
Buyers bankrupt—but business booms.
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Bearded blacksmiths, bare-boned beggars,
Brave bards, bankers, bubbly bakers,
Borrow beyond barren budget books,
By bling besotted: bounty-bent brutes.
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Bedtime-bound Babylonians, buoyantly,
Bring back bejeweled beauties, blithely,
Beneath bedchambers, beautifully built,
Bright-baubled basements brilliantly brim.
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But behind bright buildings, brawny-bricked,
Babes, before blissful, babbling bestir;
By breakfast, Babylon’s bought beauty
Blindly becomes banal burglars’ booty.
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Beneath Babylon’s black baldachin,
Bleakly bespeckled by bleeding blooms,
Bruised, bludgeoned bazaar businessmen
Belabored byes breathe—but business booms.
About the Creator
Dooney Potter
Visual artist, story teller, poet, engineer, and private tutor.
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Comments (4)
Another good entry into the vocal venture!
This is fantastic, I love how the city comes to life.
Love the bright and detailed imagery you were able to depict here!
Definitely takes me there. Nice movement!