becoming unstuck
static. frozen. dynamic. flow.

you love her, you say
and she senses a shift
the crackle and fuzz -
the static /
/ the snow of a detuned telly /
devours thoughts
detunes thinking
so she’s suspended
stuck in stasis
scrambling to say
/ something /
*
you feel the static
fizz between you
electricity charging
invisible
and also almost tangible
/ grab it
wave it over your head
your hair rises up
stands tall
sways
then release
watch it float
stick to the ceiling
hovering now
above
and
between /
*
she’s sitting
- silent -
staring at the
black
white
grey
static as the screen
though frozen
not flickering
like the
failed frequency
fixed
focused
and she finds herself wondering
do i love you
or
do i just
love
the way
you
love
me
and are they the same
and how do we know?
**
you love her
you say
and something in her shifts
softens
then sparks
a desire to be
deserving
**
love is dynamic
she thinks
floating
fluttering
shifting
changing
unstatic and unstuck
**
you love her
you say
and she drifts back down
from the ceiling
gathers the sparks between you
sprinkles them all to surround you
flattens her hair
and whispers
you love
i love
we love
About the Creator
ali
a tangled mess of thoughts. occasionally a clear one bursts through. how about writing things in a public forum? seems wise.
she / her
unceded Wurundjeri & Boon Wurrung Lands
substack: aliwriteswords
insta / upscrolled: @aliwriteswords
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