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beauty of the Sun

a poem.

By Skylar WhitneyPublished 7 months ago 1 min read
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beauty is promised

within each 24 hours of

Earth’s planetary spin

first, you awoke

mourning doves sang

if you’d decided, you could

watch the glowing ascent of a

morning rising sun

and while it may only last

a moment or two

such a time comes again

when the day is yielding its end

and there, you can view

a day’s daily close

illuminate grey clouds

in all shades of rose

ambers and apricots,

if you’re lucky, even crimson

but keep a watchful eye

for short minutes pass fast

before your

technicolour show

again, starts to dim

and such a cycle repeats

day after day

short spans of time

fleeting away

yours to capture

if only for a chance

to witness moving beauty

as the sky’s colours dance

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About the Creator

Skylar Whitney

Introvert at heart. Lover of journaling, free-verse poetry, and poutine.

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  • Mescaline Brisset7 months ago

    Sky tricks fade so quickly, we better catch them while we're here. I love your poem and the photo. Did you take it yourself?

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