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Beating Backwards

A frightened person’s exclamation got me thinking…

By Gillian Lesley ScottPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
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Someone said ….

“My heart is beating backwards”

They were scared of course

But also on drugs…

I don’t know why

But that notion

Not one you’d ever expect to hear voiced

Spoke to me….

If your heart beat backwards

Would you be able to rewind time

Get younger with each beat?

Would your blood swoop to your brain

From left to right instead of right to left

If that’s how it travels

But your brain

And everything else

Still gets the oxygen it needs?

So long as it’s not broken

Your heart is strong

You might mishear it

But breathe deep

It will keep on

( I’m sure the someone was ok….)

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About the Creator

Gillian Lesley Scott

Scots born Australian. Tales of being human. Despite aiming for the highest good of all, not always successful

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