Let time pass
And knowledge come by
Let love flow
As times go
Let kindness come first
And joy, a natural reward
Let our step trace the paths
Even if our fall wipes the ground
Let us be the last to suffer
Life will therefore be endless
Let us be the last to cry
Thus, we’ll laugh for the best
Let our cry un-dry the soils
So, there may flourish more soft soul
Let us not be sorrow
So that the circle may end
Let us not be bitter
Then life would be merrier
Let us be friends
Experience would come by
As our minds combine
Let time pass
But make each moment a treasure
Be the present
And the future will be recalled
Be it better
Then you’ll be forever
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This was so beautifully written! I loved it!
This is beautiful. Well done.
Beautiful!!!