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Be Forever

As times go

By Marie Cadette Pierre-LouisPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
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Be Forever
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Let time pass

And knowledge come by

Let love flow

As times go

Let kindness come first

And joy, a natural reward

Let our step trace the paths

Even if our fall wipes the ground

Let us be the last to suffer

Life will therefore be endless

Let us be the last to cry

Thus, we’ll laugh for the best

Let our cry un-dry the soils

So, there may flourish more soft soul

Let us not be sorrow

So that the circle may end

Let us not be bitter

Then life would be merrier

Let us be friends

Experience would come by

As our minds combine

Let time pass

But make each moment a treasure

Be the present

And the future will be recalled

Be it better

Then you’ll be forever

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Marie Cadette Pierre-Louis

Hey, it's Marie! I enjoy writing poem and amazing sotries :)

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran2 years ago

    This was so beautifully written! I loved it!

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    This is beautiful. Well done.

  • Clyde E. Dawkins2 years ago

    Beautiful!!!

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