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bathroom looks like shit
even the cold tap is fucked
manky ceiling fan
.
hair balled shower drain
mouldy face washer on sink
rusty razor rant
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cracked tile stubbed toe
misty mirror misery
towels on the floor
.
toothpaste has gone hard
spiders scurry from corners
not waiting their turn
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broken towel hooks
half smiles from behind the door
parts of disarray
.
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Rowan Finley made me do it
About the Creator
Brenton F
It's just a token of my extreme - Frank Zappa
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Comments (8)
Feels like you need a clear day to blitz that.... Very well evoked.
This was a shitshow! Hahahahahahaha. Loved your Haikus!
I gotta' agree with L.C. on this one. Just when I was thinking I needed to fix up that old bathroom...
❤️ Incredible haiku! ❤️
Feeling a bit better about the state of my bathroom right now, so many thanks for that 😁
Love this! Beautiful!!🥰
hahahaha. I love the honesty in this and the fact that shit and fuck were in the first two lines...well...the child in me...the Glaswegian in me...appreciated that greatly. Then I read Rowan's and this had even bigger impact. Well played, sir, well played!
Great Haikus!