BARBIE BOY
🩵
I AM REAL
FROM 💎
MY HAIR FOLLICLES
TO MY PLASMA…
Handsome -
Not Just a Barbie Boy🩵
I am Real while,
Crying in my Versace Fabrics…
💙
I AM REAL
LIKE: WRITING
A MESSAGE
WITH A
PEN. 🖊️
I Am Real like:
Writing a Lovestory,
While Going
Through a
Catastrophe.
Heart beating
Everglades
Of Love.
I MUST BE
REAL.
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This road has felt endless, yet limited; every step tracked. Inching away along this path, I feel trapped. Confined. Left to this narrow passage that may one day amount to something greater. Time is not a concept. Only distance. From start to finish, I laugh and cry and attempt to convince myself that this is worth it. I cannot stray. I must keep going. Every step etched, is a step taken, is measured as more than before. I cannot even recall how I got here. Maybe I don’t even really exist. Just another tick marking off a perceived presence. Of what though? I am just another line drawn. Nothing more, nothing less.
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AMAZING. Yes, you are real! 🥹❤️
Profoundly simple or simply profound... so well done 💙Anneliese
Stunt on em' bro! I loved it!
Ohhh existential and brilliant 👌🌟
Great poem
Wonderful job.
This is real and so honest! Always appreciate your heartfelt words, friend!💕
Brilliant and real!!! Loved it!!!❤️❤️💕
Love these lines: "I am Real while, / Crying in my Versace Fabrics…" Just because we have luxury items doesn't mean we somehow get luxury feelings. We are human, with real emotions (not designer ones), no matter our status or what things appear to be.
Real feeling in this crazy plastic world!
Wonderful as always 🖤🩷
Amazing poem, love the ambiguity of unfinished ideas, and the overall statement. 100 percent real! Bravo. Suggestive pictures too, very effective.
This could turn into a cool series of dialogues.
Excellent. Love the line “Everglades of love”. This poem is most certainly real, as you are. 💖
Just saw the Barbie Movie, enjoyed it thoroughly. And BTW, you most definitely are real, HandsomelouiiThe Poet, though I appreciated the wondering wandering in the poem.
So much said in so few words. Evocative, sad, and beautiful. Love this, Lonzo 🤗💕🙂
The desperation captured here is so simply evoked but so raw and so overwhelming. Nice work, Lonzo!
Cool Barbie Mania poetry series 💕
Man, you have a way of saying so much in so few words. Masterful work.
You are real and a wonderful poet! Well done on this one Lonzo! 🍩🙂👏