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Avoid The Fog

Chloe's October Writing Challenge

By Brin J.Published about a month ago 1 min read
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This warning is for all who disbelieve,

what transpires on Hallow's Eve

Do not leave the safety of light

demons and ghouls roam this night

Carry garlic with you, as Vampires wait

for those who make that simple mistake

Avoid the fog, for it'll lure you in

and trap you forever with those who sin

The veil will drop between hell and earth

allowing ghosts to freely traverse

They'll haunt you with the pains of their past

so sage your house until they're gassed

Still don't believe? Give it time,

for that shiver to trickle down your spine

it's the only warning you will get

before the resulting ending you met.

Thank you for reading. This was for the final prompt in Chloe's October challenge :)


About the Creator

Brin J.

I never believed the sky is the limit, therefore my passions are expansive. My interest in writing stemmed from poetry but my heart lead me to Sci-Fi Fantasy. Consequently, my stories are plot-driven with splashes of evocative elements.

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  • Paul Stewartabout a month ago

    I really really liked this, Brin.! Of course I did, it was penned by you! lol! Also, I can totally imagine Vincent Price reading this (if he were still alive) akin to his narration over Thriller. Had that kinda vibe! :) Well done!

  • Chloe Rose Violet 🌹about a month ago

    I loved this!! So spooky 👻 Thank you for sharing this with me ❤️

  • Babs Iversonabout a month ago

    Scary!!! Loving it!!!❤️❤️💕

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