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A Villanelle after visiting my Great-Uncle's grave.

By Conor DarrallPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
Runner-Up in Villanelle Challenge
The Old Cemetery near Glenties - photo courtesy of Ashe Lawson

Where landscape steals from steel-cold, frozen, cloud,

A smoky glen, with gentle, noble sheep;

I greet the dead with nods and smiles, aloud.

--

I’ve limped from London, lover-led and proud,

To softer Bluestacks, there our tryst to keep,

Where landscape steals from steel-cold, frozen, cloud.

--

Escaping from the life of noise and crowds;

Where living corpses, like the daylight, creep,

I greet the dead with nods and smiles, aloud.

--

Old pathways cuts through mountains, heather-browed,

(The music pausing with the sat-nav beep)

Where landscape steals from steel-cold, frozen cloud.

--

Depression lifted like a windswept shroud,

The boneyard just atop a valley deep.

I greet the dead with nods and smiles, aloud.

--

I share the truths our ancients are allowed.

My lover holds me as I proudly weep,

Where landscape steals from steel-cold, frozen, cloud,

I greet the dead with nods and smiles, aloud.

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Conor Darrall

Short stories, poetry and some burble . Irish traditional musician, medieval swords guy, draoi and strange egg. Bipolar/ADD/CPTSD/Brain Damage. Currently querying my novel 'The Forgotten 47' - @conordarrall / www.conordarrall.com

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    Written by Conor Darrall