Articulate
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When it comes to poetry, I'm a novice, rather new
So in practicing the art, I comment on people's content, it's what I do
So I think of rhymes
Then, I start to write down lines
Hey look, a haiku
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Comments (17)
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Damn good work, TY! A good college try... I need to work harder (take my lines farther) to keep up with your work, guy! ;)
❤️🌹❤️🌹❤️ Welcome newbie. 🎷 Well written. 😍
Congrat, love your sense humor🥳💃🏽😂🤣
Well done!!! Congratulations on Top Story too!!!
Lol. this is great. congrats on the top Story
LOL!!!! Sneaky haikus just find their way in everywhere. I enjoyed this! Congratulations on Top Story, my friend :)
Congratulations 🎉 TopStory❗❗❗
You couldn't resist taking us back to the not so long ago days of "haiku". LOL. I think your last line might send shudders down some people's spine. Your poem captures a ton of sentiment! Congrats on your Top Story!
Nice, congratulations on the top story!
Very clever. 😀 congrats 🥇
Clever! Nice one 😊
Ohh excellent! Congratulations on top story!
Congratulations on your Top Story
Haha, very clever!
Haha 😂 Awesome 👍 ✨😉
ha! I had to go back and count syllables and, yep! there it was!