In eons past, from Nibiru's celestial height,
Alalu descended, a cosmic knight.
His ship, a comet's radiant might,
Lit up the heavens in a celestial flight.
On Earth, a sphere of primal birth,
He stepped with purpose, claiming his worth.
With wings of fire, a comet's trail,
Alalu entered this cosmic tale.
A clash of gods, a cosmic fight,
An epic battle in the cosmic night.
Anu, the ruler of Nibiru's might,
Confronted Alalu in celestial light.
Thunder roared, stars collided,
As gods clashed, realms were divided.
Alalu, a warrior from cosmic lore,
Faced Anu in a celestial war.
The heavens witnessed this cosmic feud,
As gods clashed with fortitude.
Alalu's comet blazed bright,
A beacon in the celestial fight.
In cosmic silence, the clash was won,
Anu's might outshone the sun.
Alalu, defeated but unbowed,
In cosmic echoes, his legacy vowed.
The celestial battlefield, a tale untold,
As cosmic destinies began to unfold.
Alalu's arrival, a cosmic spark,
Left an imprint in the cosmic dark.
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Oooo, this was so fascinating! Loved your poem!
Truly a n epic tale. Gilgamesh beware. Your command of story telling within a captivating rhyme scheme is masterful. Fantastic job.