Engulfing love, it appears you’ve snuffed me out
Crowning you, it seems I’m forced to bow
Loss of words did purchase us this peace
I’ll dim, now please, please shine on me
Perhaps I did hide away some sweeter dream
Some brighter sky might hang two suns
Except now I bask in diamond rings, for all the other light is gone
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