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Angus

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By Alicia SwabyPublished 14 days ago 1 min read
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Engulfing love, it appears you’ve snuffed me out

Crowning you, it seems I’m forced to bow

Loss of words did purchase us this peace

I’ll dim, now please, please shine on me

Perhaps I did hide away some sweeter dream

Some brighter sky might hang two suns

Except now I bask in diamond rings, for all the other light is gone

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Alicia Swaby

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