Allergies, Oh Me!
Yes me, I have allergies!
The rondel supreme is a French poetic form with the following guidelines: 14-line poem broken into three stanzas. First two stanzas have four lines and final stanza has six lines.
Rhyme scheme: ABba/abAB/abbaAB (capital letters are refrains). No restrictions on syllables or subjects. Writer’s Digest, Robert Lee Brewer
My attempt at a rondel supreme:
Allergies, oh me!
Yes me, I have allergies!
Who can be allergic to cats?
Or how can it be beef or trees?
I am gluten sensitive, and to wool hats!
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Why couldn’t it be sugar calories?
I can understand bats!
Yes me, I have allergies!
Who can be allergic to cats?
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I don’t like apologies.
I would be okay with an allergy to rats!
Could I be allergic to bees or fats?
I know I have lethargies.
Yes me, I have allergies!
Who can be allergic to cats?
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First published by Write Under the Moon on medium.com
About the Creator
Denise E Lindquist
I am married with 7 children, 27 grands, and 12 great-grandchildren. I am a culture consultant part-time. I write A Poem a Day in February for 8 years now. I wrote 4 - 50,000 word stories in NaNoWriMo. I write on Vocal/Medium weekly.
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Comments (3)
I know I have lethargies was just too relatable! Lol. Loved thos format and your poem!
Fabulous!!! Loved it!!!💕❤️❤️
This goes with our discussion the other day. Boo hairless.