All these words keep falling down
Falling down, falling down
All these words keep falling down
My dear reader
*
I’ll build them up with structured forms
Structured forms, structured forms
I’ll build them up with structured forms
My dear reader
*
Structured forms won’t bear the weight
Bear the weight, bear the weight
Structured forms won’t bear the weight
My dear reader
*
I’ll build them up with rhyme and meter
Rhyme and meter, rhyme and meter
I’ll build them up with rhyme and meter
My dear reader
*
Rhyme and meter, I’ve not got
I’ve not got, I’ve not got
Rhyme and meter, I’ve not got
My dear reader
*
All these words keep falling down
Falling down, falling down
All these words keep falling down
My dear reader
Author’s Note: Needed a bit of a reminder today not to take myself too seriously, so when the tune for “London Bridge” got stuck in my head, I just decided to go with it. The result: a structured and rhyming dig at structure and rhyme.
A lot of my poems attempt to adhere to formal structures but I do take some liberties, especially with meter because it just doesn’t click in my head. But since being on Vocal I’ve actually written a few free verse poems which I’d never attempted before and I’ve actually enjoyed the process, so I’m excited to try some more (not with this piece obviously).
Also when I first became active on Vocal, I published a parody of “The Twelve Days of Christmas” as a teaser for my Whodunit Challenge entry and I had a lot of fun with it, as I did with this one. I suppose something silly can be refreshing from time to time!
If you’re still reading this, thanks for humoring me! Back to regularly scheduled programming soon!
Here’s my other parody piece:
And a couple of those free verse experiments:
About the Creator
D.K. Shepard
Character Crafter, Witty Banter Enthusiast, World Builder, Unpublished novelist...for now
Fantasy is where I thrive, but I like to experiment with genres for my short stories. Currently employed as a teacher in Louisville.
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