All that Was And All That Could Have Been
As he silently wept
I was with him when he realised what he’d done
Witnessing that very moment of his mental clarity,
Shocked to see it hit home and boy did it hit hard
It was never his intention to live with such disparity.
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I was concerned when I noticed his silent weeping
His pain tormenting him, as he cried without tears,
He seemed to be locked into his memories, a trance
As he worked through emotions from sadness to fears.
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I then heard him whisper, “I have fucked myself up”
As he crucified himself for the memories and realisation,
It was obvious to me the source of his torment, his pain
Was because he believed he truly deserved damnation.
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He mourned deeply for all that was in his grim reality
And especially suffered for all that could have been,
It clearly hit hard as it all come crashing down upon him
He struggled once he realised all was not as it seemed.
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I was uncertain as to how to console his heartache
There were no words that I could speak to calm him,
As his feelings and torment erupted deeply from within
There’s no easy fix, no words, things were looking grim.
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So I silently sat, hoping my presence offered comfort
As he worked through his pain, I hoped to console,
But he was too deeply entrenched in his torment
And all I could do was listen to the sobbing of his soul.
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Colleen Millsteed
My first love is poetry — it’s like a desperate need to write, to free up space in my mind, to escape the constant noise in my head. Most of the time the poems write themselves — I’m just the conduit holding the metaphorical pen.
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This was so sad