Mr alien come and see
What on earth means the most to me
We will go out to the country side
Hop on a horse and go for a ride
Out on the fields so green
You will ride like a queen
The look on your face
When our horses start to race
Do I hear a chuckle
Are you wishing for a seat buckle
You’ll never feel as free
As on this ride with me
About the Creator
Antoinette L Brey
I am an elder in a time of freedom. I am now retired. All i want to do is have fun. Without a daily routine, my imagination is one of my only salvations. I am not planning on writing a book, it is just for my own pleasure
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I have been taking some time away from writing. I haven't forgotten about Vocal, the truth is I just have been too busy pursuing other things to write online and honestly, my little family and I just had a really hard month between the flu and a weird eye infection/cold circulating our house. I'm currently sipping some warm peppermint tea because my throat is sore.
By Chloe Rose Violet 🌹4 days ago in BookClub
Comments (10)
Wonderful children's poem!!! Loving it!!!
SO sweet and freeing! 🥹❤️ What a beautiful adventure you have planned for this alien! Well done!
This was magnificent ♥️
This is nice piece of work...i had to subscribe right after reading for it is the best and simple
Love it, Antoinette! Light and fun 💕🙂
Loved this light hearted whimsical piece
Supercute! Great work!
Awww, this was so wonderful!
Similar theme as mine (https://vocal.media/poets/alienation). I hope we don't steal each other's thunder! I enjoyed yours. Gerard
Very good, and Groot is so cute.